fraught with angry words
the nights quiet split with rage
domestic violence
Sunday, February 21, 2010
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They are mine and please don't steal them! (remember a Haiku is a three line poem with 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables )
True that. Sad, with dangerous portent.
ReplyDeletevery strong poem
ReplyDeleteThat's what it sounds like out on the street, well captured!
ReplyDeleteSad reality of the times we live in.
ReplyDeleteScary how prevalent this seems.
ReplyDeleteFraught with emotion, not only for the people involved, but all who are a witness to it.
ReplyDeleteScary, true, sad. Excellent work.
ReplyDeleteYou nailed it!
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