Sunday, February 27, 2011

Eternal

ever in my heart
eyes closed I can still hear you
the swing on your porch
         
            or

eternal tears
falling just behind my eyes
water lillies thrive

find it here.....................
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7 comments:

  1. Sarah malikFebruary 27, 2011 at 2:32 AM

    both are touching, they depict loneliness and longing which i wish isn't eternal in anybody's life !

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  2. Mike and Sandy PatrickFebruary 27, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    The memory depicted in the first haiku must be very special.
    Mike
    http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/

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  3. beccagivensFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    I like both - but the image evoked in the first is my favorite - special memories!

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    The truth is in the tension in both. Lovely.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    the first has a haunting feeling but is not scary :)

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:50 PM

    swing on the porch,

    divine imagery..
    :)

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  7. Someone is SpecialFebruary 28, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    touching Gia.. Thanks..

    Someone is Special

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