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You write too? Cool
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A Prompt Each Day8 years ago
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radiant13 years ago
About Me
- Gia's Spot
- I work the midnight shift Dispatching at a local PD..Not for the faint or weak of heart! I live an upside down life and appreciate that I am employed when so many others are not, ,,,,,,,,,I am pretty easy going. I love my alone time. I love my two daughters. I like to sing (yup Keroke queen, you guessed it!) I love spending time with my two Sisters. We hike up mountains, get pedicures, have pajamma parties in Florida motels, anything we can think of that will make us laugh and make a rocking chair memory, I love watching my little ones (my four grandchildren) grow and change and discover the world for the very first time! They call me Gia.....
Wow, yer right, hugging is exactly what you might do when trembling with fear. A perfect hard-boiled micro-poem. Kinda reminds me of an Uma Thurman scene out of Pulp Fiction, right?
ReplyDeleteMakes me think of those gritty British detective thrillers on TV. Super convincing 'ku -- thanks Gia.
ReplyDeleterunning and trembling. this haiku makes my heart pound!
ReplyDeleteChilling. A mini-novel, this is full of energy and vivid imagery!
ReplyDeleteVery very nice. Love your imagery. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
You can run, but you can't hide.
ReplyDeleteTrembling in terror but safety in sight - nicely written.
ReplyDeleteVery very cool. I like it lots! Thanks Gia!
ReplyDeleteAulice
So scary. Definitely a trembling experience.
ReplyDeleteaction haiku, I would this, though I chuckle at the first line, it still produce quite a visual
ReplyDeleteYou sure got a whole fascinating story packed into three lines...wow!
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